SECURITY
Strolling is striving for goals
When
the goings seem good and fair
The
steering of destiny
Is
like mark of juvenile
In
dressing the battle line
There
is a gold medal
To
contend and defend
This
is the hard sentence of joy
And
that’s an enviable position
To
meet up the demands
Of
the people in Ubene community
But
Jealousy is like a burning fire
A
heart
Seared
with hot Iron
Dressing
the wound of the past
Can
never be mended again
To
tolerate is easy
But
to defend is Joy and Pride
Can
one still go on molestation?
And
pretend to be a saint?
I
don’t understand
The
strength to defend
An
enviable desire
To
demand and admire (something you want)
The
collection of love
Street
fighter and steady quarrels
Can
be dangerous
In
a strange land or environment
Mind
your word!
Lest
you become a victim
Of
Circumstance and failure
In
variable dimension
Go
to ant
And
learn to design
The
ways to the top
And
win the battle line
Creation
is good
But
has no room
For
a dull moment
This
is a bitter truth
And
I must say it
To
bring to order
The
destroyed plumb line
Of
Dignity
Mark
your words
And
be on guard
Because
the nuisance
Are
around the corner and crannies
To
take what belongs to you
In
a platter of jealousy and envy
Be
on guard!
Says
the Almighty
DESCRIPTION: The poem security is an ode type of poem that narrates
the ordeals of the Hero, contemplated for a set back and the desire to
re-design one’s destiny but now cautious and conscious of security measures to
go about it. It is a quartet (four line poems) we are going take the poem line
by line in description:
From line 1-4: The poet deployed a figure of speech known as simile
that uses words “like” and “as” used as comparison to liken the nature which
the verb “strolling” throws at destiny.
The poet is trying to let us know the important of being busy in a
conducive atmosphere; especially when thing are going fine in terms of business
transaction. And he makes us to understand that such activities are the
steering that controls one’s destiny which he also described to be a juvenile exuberance
(meaning the full bloom strong life of a youth).
From line 5-8: The poet also point out the early stage of planning
for the goals set ahead by such person, though along the line, there must be
obstacle to discourage the goal. But notwithstanding the oppositions; the pace
setter must has a target to aim and achieve. And these targets forms his aims
and objectives as weapon to contend for the gold medal which is the ultimate
target of every competitor; though a hard sentence of Joy as described by the
poem at the early stage but not at the end because of the oppositions and
obstacles from competitors.
From line 9-12: The poet also described the target of this person to
be an enviable position that demands the hard work of meeting up a special request
of a particular people of a similar norms, believe, culture, language but
strange attitude; which the poet named such people to be “Ubene Community”. But
the prevailing jealousy is a hindrance from this person’s oppositions which the
poet described as a “burning fire”, ceased the position.
From line 13-16: The poet described the attitude of such jealousy to
be a heart seared with hot iron to dress the wound of the past events, and said
that such heart can never be healed or mended again.
From line 17-20: The poet said that it is a common thing to tolerate
the insult and opposition to such aspiration but to defend the ordeals and
pressures that come with such oppositions is a prideful and Joyful attitude to
the plight of the victim. The poet asked “how
can one still go on molestation and pretend to be a saint?”
From line 21-24: The poet said
that the victim assumes misunderstanding of such strength to defend an instinctual
behavior that demands and desires what he sees.
From line 25-28: The poet describing such desires to be a collective
of love affairs, which might trigger a future street fighters and steady
quarrels in a strange land or environment.
From line 29-32: The poet said that such actions demand security
measures; especially to mind ones words; lest one become a victim of
circumstances and failure, especially in variable dimension.
From line 33-36: The poet said that the victim should go to the ant
and learn hard work on the way to re-design one’s destiny to the top position
without assistance but through self-effort and self-employed because of such
oppositions. The poet concludes that this is the only way and measure to win
the battle line.
From line 37-40: The poet said that what God had created is good and
wonderful; but there is no room for dull moment as he likens the phrases to be
some bitter truth.
From line 41-44: The poet made us to understand that there is already
a destroyed plumb line of dignity; which need to be restored through hard work
From line 45-48:. The poet said that you should mark your words and be
security conscious over what you say; especially in revealing secrets because
there are oppositions around you as nuisance to copy and paste your dreams as
well as pursue them and make money with them. So be security conscious and
limit your words.
From line 49-52: The poet said that these opposes are eager to assume
your position in Jealousy and envy which may put your life at their risk of
trying to eliminate you because of these good fortunes. So be on your guard.
WRITTEN
BY
ONYIA EMEKA HEATH
08186388641
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