VENGEANCE
What a pastry
That plunders the little
pet
In
a pretty little pay
Point
of Power!
Inhumanity
prey
Blasting
the Cornel
Into
deserter of fire
An
attestation of death
Of
dear lieutenant Cornel
In
an cold bloody afternoon
After
the status of power
I
felt for you dear one
Calling
to order the state
To
intervene in your case of failure
For
fairly Justice
To
the state of your memory
May
the gods strike!
May
the angel flight!
To
the avenge of our dear one Lieutenant
Cornel Musa
The
pace setter of his comrades
The
prime of Idoko land
A
man of wisdom and honour
Saturating
the invisible
In
a cloudy shadowy wave
A
blessing to men of honour
Has
gone to point of no return
May
your memory remain blessed
May
your wisdom grow
To
the point of your remembrance
The
prime setter!
The
got of great men!
Adieu
Brother
Written
by: Onyia Emeka Harford
DESCRIPTION: The poem is an elegy which is a poem expressing the
death of someone, it is a four line poem known as quatrain. Though the sound
are erratic, like line 1-4 sound are abba which are not the same with line 5-8
(aabc). The poem is a civilized one that talks of Military combatants. One of
them became a victim on trying to eat a snack that attracted his attention.
LINES 1-4 describes his appetite and the nature of the meat pie that got
his attention, which he was trying to purchase with his money when their
opponent attacked him with Guns and opened fire on him. But the other soldiers
that witnessed his death are singing the above elegy. This is like a border war
that has to do with opponent laying ambush against Nigerian soldiers while in a
village like Soweto. The situation surrounding this event is that the soldier
is testy, having walked a long distance, are hungry and saw a pastry that seems
attractive, but on trying to purchase it, without knowing that the enemies has
laid an ambush at that spot, he became a victim while the narrator and others
take cover.
LINE 5-8 describes how he was killed in an open fire, the lines
are very clear, it does not need much explanation
LINE 9-12 this event occurred in the afternoon, according to the
narrator of the story who felt the impact of the death of the lieutenant Cornel.
And it was painful to his memory.
LINE 13-16 the poet is calling on the state to intervene on his
behalf through remembrance and compensation to His family and loved one over
the sad news. He also asked for fairly justice to his service to humanity.
LINE 17-20 the pain of his death triggered sorrow and anger to
avenge in the narrator who is helpless to avenge to his death, now calls on the
supernatural powers to avenge for him.
LINE 21-24 the narrator described the victim as a great man, who
has left legacy in the service of the nation, and envisioning his spirit as it
saturating the environment in a shadowy wave.
LINE 25-28 AND 29-32 describes how the
poet bade his memory and wished
rest to his soul.
WRITER/PUBLISHER: ONYIA EMEKA HARFORD
CONTACT: +2348186388641
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